In many viewpoints, witch could be the reason to work diary?
By: Fernando Lopez M.
It’s important live without money, that is why is difficult to live without work, because that work will provide money necessary to live, to supply needs and others aspects that we can have, but this is the only reason for people to work? Maybe is one of the factors to make people go out for a job. This topic is very common and is indispensable make conclusions about that.
To begin with, we can say that when a person works, he usually talks, meet, interactive and cooperate with others. At this point, working can help in many aspects, it can help people win respect, friends and sometimes we can become a supporter of someone. Following this order of ideas you can learn many things for you life experience, knowledge, also it could helps to self-expression, and the list of benefits that can provide is too long. Think about it!
Secondly, who want stay in home all day like a mushroom? It’s difficult stay in home with a lot of things to do, for people is great feel good, for example, if you are a student like me, your primary job should be the study, who doesn’t fell so good when don’t have nothing to worry when de labor is accomplished? It’s feeling good, and this is a reason for to do something to feel good with ourselves.
In other side, we keep talking about insurance, house, needs, cars, etc, and always we want more of what we can buy, so we can assume that without money is impossible to take a normal life. Also I can ask something, who doesn’t want a house? Or a car? All these can be possible only with money, and work provides it. Is for this that to replace the different needs in our daily life is necessary to have a predetermined work.
To conclude I can say that there is very relative the philosophy of persons take the labor of the work, since it depends on many factors determined by every one, and viewpoint of them. In what it is necessary to do emphasis it s in the way of working then it’s correct to affirm that it is necessary to work to live but to be incorrect to say that it is necessary to live to work.
1 comentario:
5. “it” is missing, check grammar (e.g. IT is important…)
1. Divide your sentences; you need to use full stops too.
2. Check grammar: “s” in the end of the verbs after he, she, it; you – your, etc-
3. Want TO do smth
4. “In other side” – is not correct, look for another expression
5. Emphasis ON smth
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